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Cannons of the Comstock

A book review for parents

This historical Western fiction book is the fifth in the "Saga of the Sierras" series by Brock and Bodie Thoene and is published by Bethany House Publishers.

Cannons of the Comstock is written for people ages 15 and up. The age range reflects readability and not necessarily content appropriateness.

Plot Summary

In 1864, California is a mixture of Union supporters and Confederate sympathizers. Although Tom Dawson’s family is from Virginia, their sympathies are with the Union, and they are strongly opposed to slavery. After hearing of a Confederate secret society plot to seize control of California silver and gold mines, Tom infiltrates the group to supply information to the Union army. As a spy, Tom is drawn into a dangerous game of deception that forces him to rely heavily on Mont James, a 9-year-old former slave. As Tom earns the trust of the leaders of the group and breaks up their plans to outfit a ship as a privateer, Mont is kidnapped and placed in an underground Chinese slavery ring. Later, after Mont escapes, he and Tom reunite to battle the Confederate sympathizers before someone escapes with the stolen gold shipments.

Christian Beliefs

While the main thrust of the book is the intrigue over the Confederate secret society, the authors do provide background on how churches split over the Civil War, even to the point of trying to out-sing each other during worship services. They describe the bitter feelings that divided congregations and neighbors as Christians tried to practice their faith. While a biblical text supporting slavery is used, in each scene this viewpoint loses to the biblical quotes that do not support slavery.

Authority Roles

Although white and Chinese slaveholders play an important role in the story, they are depicted as evil.

Other Belief Systems


Profanity/Graphic Violence

The word n-gger is used a few times. Fight scenes include detailed descriptions of the attacks but are tame compared to what viewers may see on television or in movies.


The story details a mild romance between characters, but there is no kissing. A woman who is clearly viewed as having a bad character and being a Confederate sympathizer attempts a seduction.



Discussion Topics

If your children have read this book or someone has read it to them, consider these discussion topics:

Opium drugs and opium addicts are in some scenes, but the users are not portrayed in a positive light.

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